My slide show of forest fires in Crowsnest pass
http://www.slideshare.net/jesselee/presentations

Things I have changed in my power point:
1) Transitions have been changed to reinforce communication; they have a symmetry of action within the power point.
2) The grammar has been changed to eliminate redundancy.
3) The color and size of the font; to be consistent throughout.
4) The background has been created with the same template.
5) I added titles to give the power point direction and focus in each slide.